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Tuesday, January 31, 2012
Just Like You, Part 1: "Almost a Spoiler"
I almost gave a spoiler about Mr. Sir knowing about Soraya’s family history in Chapter 2, but she tries to deny it. I had to cut out a lot of dialogue in the chapter because I remembered I didn’t want to do much other than make readers guess about her until the big reveal at the end. I didn’t want D-Tent, Mr. Sir, or Dr. Pendanski to know who Soraya really is, but the Warden would know.
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