Tuesday, February 21, 2012

Fairvale, Part 15: "Forest chase"

There’s one scene I was going to put in Fairvale that didn’t end up making the cut. Toby was at McDonald’s and saw Duke, who chased Toby through the forest. It never made it into the story because I forgot the scene, and I realized that the forest wouldn’t match the geography of the town. A scene with Toby at a fast-food restaurant ended up being the tomato incident.