Tuesday, January 31, 2012

Fairvale, Part 11: "Following Rudolph in the cemetery"

Originally, I wanted Connie to follow her son through Green Lawn Cemetery in Chapter 6. I couldn’t figure out how her faking her death and visiting her son would fit into the plot, so I changed it to be that Duke followed Rudolph to make him more of a creepy jerk.

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