The point of view I write stories depends mostly on the tone I want to set for the story. For Fairvale, I decided to focus on each character in third person, since I thought first person would be too confusing. I wanted it to be the teens’ story, how they collectively saved the motel. In the sequel, I decided to switch to first person because I wanted it to be a more intimate feel to how Norman II dealt with growing up in the Bates Motel, having a twin sister, dealing with teenage life, and having a mother who may not be all there even when she’s there.
"While you're watching us do the things that we do,/ We're... watching... YOU!" - Plain White T's (Ever wonder why things worked out the way they did in Hobbit4Lyfe's stories? Now you can find out the answers!)
Showing posts with label Fairvale 2. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Fairvale 2. Show all posts
Tuesday, January 31, 2012
Fairvale, Part 5: "Fairvale vs. Fairvale 2"
I knew how I wanted to end my first story as soon as I started writing it, pretty much. As I finally did get close to the end, I accidentally forgot a few details. One such detail I wanted to add was: What happened to Duane Duke? Something I remember hearing in Psycho IV was that Norman’s wife, Connie, got the house from a previous marriage, according to Norman. I wondered what happened to the man that is apparently Rudolph’s stepfather, so I was going to give him an appearance in Fairvale. In my rush to finish the story, I accidentally forgot to add Rudolph’s stepdad. I realized that, so his cameo will be in Fairvale 2. When reading the first story to my friend, Tarryn, she kept asking what happened to the two kids, especially after the convent scene. I decided that my main focus of the sequel was to tell what happened to Norman II and Connie II.
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